《以花喻人之妙》
诗中以花喻人，妙趣横生。先是“人如桃花粉映红”，将佳人面色与桃花相联，那粉嫩娇颜被日头映照，透着鲜活娇艳，仿佛春日桃花绽于枝头，娇美动人。“红面桃花似芙蓉”进一步升华，红润面庞如芙蓉般，既清新脱俗又艳丽非凡，凸显出众姿容。而“面色梨花白带粉”，以梨花的粉白形容，营造出纯净娇羞之感，且从粉白面色能映出开怀，侧面展现愉悦心情。
改写后的诗句同样精彩，“佳人面色若桃花”直白点出相似，“粉嫩娇颜映日红”描绘具体画面。“红颊恰似芙蓉艳”强化艳丽感，“玉面又如梨蕊绽”突出纯净。最后“此般模样真堪画，悦色开怀意趣浓”，总结出佳人模样如画，好心情满溢，读来令人不禁遐想那花般娇美的女子面容。
《The Beauty of Comparing People to Flowers》
《The Beauty of Comparing People to Flowers》
The original lines compare the features of a person's complexion to different flowers to depict a charming face. For example, "People are like peach blossoms with pink hues shining through, and the rosy face is like a lotus flower." By comparing a person to peach blossoms, the pink of the flowers highlights the rosy complexion, giving a vivid and delicate impression. The line "The rosy face like a lotus flower" further enhances this beauty, making the person with a rosy face as wonderful as a lotus, which usually gives people an impression of being fresh, refined and gorgeous, thus highlighting the outstanding appearance. And "The complexion is like pear blossoms, white with a touch of pink, and the pinkish-white complexion reflects joy" uses the white with a touch of pink of pear blossoms to describe the complexion, creating a pure and slightly shy atmosphere. Moreover, the fact that joy can be reflected from the complexion also shows the person's happy mood from the side. Overall, these lines compare people to flowers to set off the beauty and good mood of the person, and the language is rather straightforward and vivid.
The rewritten lines are also excellent. "The complexion of the beauty is like peach blossoms, and the delicate and pink face shines red in the sun." It directly points out the similarity. "The rosy cheeks are just like the gorgeous lotus flowers" emphasizes the sense of gorgeousness. "The jade-like face is like the blooming pear blossoms" highlights the purity. Finally, "Such an appearance is really worthy of being painted, and the happy expression and cheerful mood are full of charm." It sums up that the beauty's appearance is like a painting and her good mood is overflowing, making readers can't help but imagine the face of the woman as beautiful as a flower.